A good FPV sequence gives the viewer time to understand where the camera is going. Start with one clear route and one visual subject rather than a long list of manoeuvres.
Walk through the shot
Study the location from the ground. Identify an open approach, a clear exit and an area where the shot can end. For a first sequence, an open stretch of landscape provides an effective subject without requiring a tight gap.
Edit for direction
Sketch three frames: the opening view, the moment the subject becomes clear and the final view. Keep the direction of travel consistent across cuts. Watch the finished sequence once without music. If it still feels easy to follow, the pictures are doing their job.